Aet Lindling

:lol: (tis really Lavigne, btw. twas misspelled on purpose. this is chatroom, after all) HELP! AVRIL LAVGINE!

Thanks! Yeah, something about that was bugging me. I was paying attention to the time and details more. :lol: righto, I'l probably edit that a bit. Edit: Done.

1. Hrmm this was quite well written. It's similar to how I write and so I followed it easily. Good job on that. 2. I think I need to read ...

Oh god. This has the potential to become one of those epic YWS inside jokes. Or just plain epic. Oh yes. O yes. Oyesoyesoyesoyesoyes. eSoy?

I need . No, seriously, I NEED .

By the way, what I mean by void for the position is that if he had been without fear, and then bye bye, he gets killed or something and we ...

Thanks! Other people have pointed this out on another forum I posted this on, I'll probably edit in spaces along with posting a new chapter, which should happen soon!

Heh!

Back in teh other forums, i meant i would have to... copy off the plot slightly. Permission? :D

Thanks!

Your Scarecrow signature... who is the Scarecrow??

"commas", you mean? :lol:

Erm, one thing. Why exactly is this rated PG, given the presence of a certain F-word?

Great poem, my only complaint is the same as my predecessor's, split into stanzas it would be easier to read.

Chapter 2: Aello ( ay -lo) Aello took the steaming loaves of bread out of the large oven, her experienced hands sliding the oval shapes off the pan and into ...